Friday 9 February 2007

Initial CFBC error report (December 2006)

page

missing pics or links

typos

index

5x5space.gif

This applies to all pages in the footer - it may be better to remove it

education link goes to one of my Latin pages!

doginfo

broken link to Common problems

Centre

To book

catinfo

broken link to cat behaviour

information gathering (use italics)

Various

click below

catinfofull

Centre

remove justified text - left better

headings on bars should be white

Consultfull

Veterinarian. A

odd mix of justified and left aligned text. make all left.

7th para. dog’s

use either for example -

or for example:

inconsistent use of capitals for Consultation - decide C or c and stick with it throughout

final para. remember

To book

vet

“Full referral procedure here” Where? use “below” or make “here” a link

1st para. letter.

veterinarian has a V most other places

4th bullet “refer the client verbally” delete verbally

problems

To book

problemslist

Odd first line font style

until you get the links uploaded you should add something to say they’ll be coming soon.

tour

the Next button is referred to but doesn’t actually say ‘Next’ Suggest saying click the button below or putting a > on the button too

All the tour pages have slightly different image dimensions. It would be much nicer to decide a fixed size for all and crop the larger ones accordingly and replace ones that are too small.

All the tour page RH column text appears to be vertically aligned “Middle”. This will be better as “Top”. Ideally the bottom bar shouldn’t move as they ‘turn the pages’.

tourin1

3 paras, 3 font styles!!

toura

Centre

tour1a

Centre

tour3

2nd line “who display

tour5

inconsistent use of capitals for German Shepherd

tour9

Room One

tour10

Room

Ike, a German . .

Room Two

it was also the client who attended

tour15

replace “to initially assess” with “for initial assessment

tour16, 17, 18, 19, 20

client’s (on each page)

dog’s on 16 and 20

tour21

4 lines, 3 styles!!

To book

directions

rollover not working (2nd image missing)

contact

delete the ; at the end

media

some column problems here, maybe due to the picture being wider than this page was designed for. Try joining some cells together and moving content around. Failing that, make the image smaller as on other pages

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