Friday 9 February 2007

Initial CFBA error report (January 2007)

page

missing pics or links

typos

all / general

the oval logo top right appears to change from page to page!

blue fading background only appears on one page I found (courses) due to broken link

I feel heading text should be vertically aligned Middle to match logo

contacttemp

centre alignment looks odd to me

members

“Click here” after pet insurance doesn’t work

bottom para - left align and add a full stop.

colin

tidy alignment of links at bottom

both paras should be left aligned

replace & with and in line 6

roger

undesirable white space at top - text may be vertically aligned middle or have extra spaces there

tidy bottom link alignment

Naturalist . (remove space)

line 3: Cats has a capital but dogs hasn’t. Suggest neither has capital.

penultimate line: world’s

charlie

space at top as for other two

picture better if rt aligned

4th line: delete magazine

2nd para, 2nd line: clients’

join

text is justified - left align instead

swap “below category

members’

current, (delete comma)

self-addressed

contact us” either put in inverted commas or make a link itself

media

a change back to my orginal font here - need to be consistent throughout site - one or the other

1st para needs a return after “below:” to correct line spacing and delete following space (may need to look at code)

“contact us”

above. (replace : with .)

courses

only page I found with blue fade background!! Nice.

some paras justified, some not

reference to course titles a bit odd as they’re not there - all this needs re-drafting now.

Update to 1st para on right needed

course4

update needed

education

looks like some columns need re-arranging

2nd para: to date (delete hyphen)

3rd para, 1st col: teaching aid:

(colon not semi-colon)

Open University

2nd col: bullet points should start with:

coverage (that’s OK)

exploring

organising (note s not z too)

discussing

comparing

reviewing

(or alternative gerunds (sorry) not verbs)

courses3

update needed (or just change the date!)

2nd col: DVDs NO APOSTROPHE!!

Open Uni

memberslist

Joyce’s pic!

ENorth Wales!

Gill’s tel no - is that right?

associateslist

Nicola image? and ALT text says Colin!

corporate

important page to get right if you’re to attract sponsors

need to stop text bumping into table - insert a new table for icons and names and consider removing blue background and using less intrusive alternative

(I may need to help get this page looking smart)

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