| page | missing pics or links | typos |
| all / general | the oval logo top right appears to change from page to page! blue fading background only appears on one page I found (courses) due to broken link I feel heading text should be vertically aligned Middle to match logo | |
| contacttemp | | centre alignment looks odd to me |
| members | “Click here” after pet insurance doesn’t work | bottom para - left align and add a full stop. |
| colin | tidy alignment of links at bottom | both paras should be left aligned replace & with and in line 6 |
| roger | undesirable white space at top - text may be vertically aligned middle or have extra spaces there tidy bottom link alignment | Naturalist . (remove space) line 3: Cats has a capital but dogs hasn’t. Suggest neither has capital. penultimate line: world’s |
| charlie | space at top as for other two picture better if rt aligned | 4th line: delete magazine 2nd para, 2nd line: clients’ |
| join | | text is justified - left align instead swap “below category” members’ current, (delete comma) self-addressed “contact us” either put in inverted commas or make a link itself |
| media | a change back to my orginal font here - need to be consistent throughout site - one or the other | 1st para needs a return after “below:” to correct line spacing and delete following space (may need to look at code) “contact us” above. (replace : with .) |
| courses | only page I found with blue fade background!! Nice. | some paras justified, some not reference to course titles a bit odd as they’re not there - all this needs re-drafting now. Update to 1st para on right needed |
| course4 | | update needed |
| education | looks like some columns need re-arranging | 2nd para: to date (delete hyphen) 3rd para, 1st col: teaching aid: (colon not semi-colon) Open University 2nd col: bullet points should start with: coverage (that’s OK) exploring organising (note s not z too) discussing comparing reviewing (or alternative gerunds (sorry) not verbs) |
| courses3 | | update needed (or just change the date!) 2nd col: DVDs NO APOSTROPHE!! Open Uni |
| memberslist | Joyce’s pic! | ENorth Wales! Gill’s tel no - is that right? |
| associateslist | Nicola image? and ALT text says Colin! | |
| corporate | important page to get right if you’re to attract sponsors need to stop text bumping into table - insert a new table for icons and names and consider removing blue background and using less intrusive alternative (I may need to help get this page looking smart) | |
Friday, 9 February 2007
Initial CFBA error report (January 2007)
Initial CFBC error report (December 2006)
| page | missing pics or links | typos |
| index | 5x5space.gif This applies to all pages in the footer - it may be better to remove it education link goes to one of my Latin pages! | |
| doginfo | broken link to Common problems | Centre To book |
| catinfo | broken link to cat behaviour | information gathering (use italics) Various click below |
| catinfofull | | Centre remove justified text - left better headings on bars should be white |
| Consultfull | | Veterinarian. A odd mix of justified and left aligned text. make all left. 7th para. dog’s use either for example - or for example: inconsistent use of capitals for Consultation - decide C or c and stick with it throughout final para. remember To book |
| vet | | “Full referral procedure here” Where? use “below” or make “here” a link 1st para. letter. veterinarian has a V most other places 4th bullet “refer the client verbally” delete verbally |
| problems | | To book |
| problemslist | Odd first line font style until you get the links uploaded you should add something to say they’ll be coming soon. | |
| tour | the Next button is referred to but doesn’t actually say ‘Next’ Suggest saying click the button below or putting a > on the button too All the tour pages have slightly different image dimensions. It would be much nicer to decide a fixed size for all and crop the larger ones accordingly and replace ones that are too small. All the tour page RH column text appears to be vertically aligned “Middle”. This will be better as “Top”. Ideally the bottom bar shouldn’t move as they ‘turn the pages’. | |
| tourin1 | 3 paras, 3 font styles!! | |
| toura | | Centre |
| tour1a | | Centre |
| tour3 | | 2nd line “who display” |
| tour5 | | inconsistent use of capitals for German Shepherd |
| tour9 | | Room One |
| tour10 | | Room Ike, a German . . Room Two it was also the client who attended |
| tour15 | | replace “to initially assess” with “for initial assessment” |
| tour16, 17, 18, 19, 20 | | client’s (on each page) dog’s on 16 and 20 |
| tour21 | 4 lines, 3 styles!! | To book |
| directions | rollover not working (2nd image missing) | |
| contact | | delete the ; at the end |
| media | some column problems here, maybe due to the picture being wider than this page was designed for. Try joining some cells together and moving content around. Failing that, make the image smaller as on other pages | |
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